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Discussion in 'DeviantART' started by Newfag101, Sep 18, 2011.

  1. Luny loop Newfriend

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    The elbows are supposed to start somewhere below the ribcage, the forearm does not bend like that.
    Foot is facing another direction than the rest of the leg, the hind leg is noticeably longer than the front leg.
    (Also given her muscular build, the torso seems out of place)
    I would redline this but i think i would make it worse.
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  2. MashedPotatoes EDF Hero

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    I think I like you already
  3. TheGreekDollmaker EDF Hero

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    [IMG] A new piece I did, called The Gryphon, done in about five days. Drypoint on Zinc Plate with Aquatint.
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  4. Sir Wulfington EDF Elite

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    [IMG]

    Welp, I'm done. At the very least I managed to move away from that photo-realism style. Hopefully my next piece will be better.
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    And for today, I decided to try and draw a naked soldier.

    such chest
    endsenten and Solution like this.
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  6. Luny loop Newfriend

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    Maybe you should focus on the rendering first, before you add in the finishing touches.

    You mentioned before that you thought that one of the knees were wonky or some shit. Neck is non-existent, i think he may be missing his wrists and maybe you can correct me here, but i think that the elbows are a bit too high. Work on that

    The coloring, however, is nice and the palette is pleasing to the eyes.


    Such booty beauty.
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  8. Sir Wulfington EDF Elite

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    Eh, I'm okay how the rendering turned out. I thought the left knee had the lighting it the wrong spot, but it should be right now. I did a structuring layer to make sure the proportions were correct (well that and using photo references). I think what you're seeing in regards to the wrists and elbows has something to do with the placement and design of the gauntlets. Maybe.

    I admittedly forgot to double check the neck when I was doing one last error-checking before uploading, I decided to just have it be obscured by shadow.
  9. Ink-Dude Dramacrat

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    A minor revision of a pic I posted previously. Now with extra images to see the details.

    Dortrieve_revision.jpg Dortrieve_upper.jpg
  10. Ink-Dude Dramacrat

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    Aw for fuck's sake! Fuckin' phone!
  11. Sir Wulfington EDF Elite

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  12. Ink-Dude Dramacrat

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    That's just it, tho. In the gallery it shows all fine and dandy, but then I put it here and it goes full on retard for some reason.
  13. Ink-Dude Dramacrat

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    Fixed, Finally!!!

    Now back to business, I revised this piece a tad bit. Does it look good?
  14. Ink-Dude Dramacrat

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    Critique pwetty pweaze? :meow:
  15. MashedPotatoes EDF Hero

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    It looks ugly but I can't figure out exactly why

    a critique by mashedpotatoes
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  16. repaint EDF Elite

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    how many times can we say street fighter rip-off
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  17. Ink-Dude Dramacrat

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    Really? Also, fixed. Now with a question mark. I didn't think somebody would say that. But what makes the character look like a street fighter character?

    Elaborate.
  18. Khanzer EDF official mascot

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    Worst boots ever.
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  19. Ink-Dude Dramacrat

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    Come on. I need more. Like:

    Proportions
    Light source
    Shading
    Anatomy
    Design
    Consistency

    I need the whole shebang.
  20. MashedPotatoes EDF Hero

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    Uhhhh over the top cartoonish smugface on a relatively realistically proportioned face, messy beyond charm linework, mouths don't touch the nose like that, index finger like the arm of an adventure time character, the fucks wrong with her clothes, her boobs and her shirt defy physics, like REEEAALY REALLY BAD lines.

    Better?
    I don't think that's everything, I still can't put together what really irks me about it.
    It looks like one of those bad celebrity portraits.
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