You can tell he knows shit by just looking at those hideous strokes (clearly copied from a printed source). I would give you some stroke guide sheets but that'd be feeding his weeabooery.
They do... look a bit traced, yes. this guy's either really limited in skill, or they just started and leaped off the deep end right down paraphilia alley. Never goes real well for those head first types. They get real obsessive and pushy bout their shit.
yeah, endsenten, it looks like they traced them out badly or followed a reference too closely. It's like kindergarten letter writing in some ways.