Johnjoseco

Even the in between is gasping.

Well the salamanstra/salamantsra typo still piss me off.

What's the point in taking time and effort to put cat ears on a main character if you're never going to have them do anything? Like, I don't know, having them lay flat when the character is trying to block out loud noises?

Remove the 5th panel, splash a little blood around, add in the corpse of the fourth member of this little group (how did you forget that one, John?), and this becomes a death scene with actual emotional impact.

As it is, it's just bland, boring, and forgettable.

Just like the character who got killed off, actually.

And so another one eats shit.
You know, considering it's her first time seeing a tragedy of this magnitude, she's really taking it quite well. The first time with the assassin, she didn't really see anybody get hurt, and her friend was fine.

Joseco need to layoff using Family Guy for reference.

I never witnessed an attack so boring and bland before, none of their facial expressions ever change it's like they've all been given botox injections.

Does @Khanzer have ass?

Dat face tho.

Kessah? Did they intentionally give her a name that sounds like "kissa" (cat in Finnish)? Because that would be super lame - although I wouldn't be surprised.

Oh hello exposition soldier. I see you speak in clunky dialogue. You also seem to like to waste time explaining situations to random nobodies instead of just telling everyone to get to the evac pods.

And doesn't the ship have a speaker system for this?

Man I haven't seen JohnJosecos great epic Shitastra wonder How he improves such a great work of art....

Finally! Somekind of action stuff happening!


Well kinda.. actiony. Also, explaining stuff! Convinient.

Show don't tell you motherfucker. That's twice within two fucking pages back to back where you dumped useless exposition from a random nobody about something we could have figured out with a simple "There's no way I'm not getting on one of those pods" or similar dialogue from anyone fighting.

You've gotta be kidding me.

If there's that many hunters on a single airship, why the fuck can't they team up to kill the monster? It's literally their job, and the monster's made it easier for them by latching onto the ship. How are they all so dirt retarded?

I think they're following the cliche that any warriors besides the two main characters are dirt as fuck useless.

But our main wolf/cat character IS useless.

Yes but the other people being useless makes her seem like she's not. If you know, you don't think too hard about it at least.

Wait, who's the enemy, and what the fuck are they fighting? I'm lost with this whole shit.