Johnjoseco

Inb4 "ugu don't touch my ears/tail it's my weak spot"

He probably imagines himself as him and wishes a cat/wolf/dog/whateverthehecksheis would blush to him.

Speaking of Joseco, this has been annoying me:

http://salamanstra.keenspot.com/about.html



His face is turned away from the viewer, while the other 2 involved in this comic have their faces in full view. What, do you think you're too cool to look at us, John?

he's a mysterious lone wolf

Glasses are not even that big, it looks like those lens go down to his nose.

"It-it's not like I like you or anything hunter-senpai!"

He just told you your sister is dead and then he BLEW. UP, YOUR. HOUSE. earlier that evening. My god.

Told ya. Seriously, how old are they?

Old enough to breed.

At least goddamn fill out the pointless stats jesus christ.

Despite no information being given(oh the joys of ambiguously aged characters), Dianna always looked to be in her early-to-mid 20s to me. Kessah seems quite a bit younger than her, given her appearance and general maturity, so I would imagine her to be in her mid-to-late teens. Adrien looks like he was in the same age range as Diana, give or take a few years.
At a guess, I'd say Kessah's 16-17(on the brink of maturity but still kinda dumb) and Adrien's 25-26(a fairly well-adjusted adult for all intents and purposes). With an age gap of 9-10 years or so, considering how much a person can grow and change in that time, it does strike me as a bit off-putting for there to be such a difference in maturity between the potential love interests. While a good writer might be able to pull off such a pairing, this story does not have a good writer, and implications of the coupling are already starting to make me cringe. Partially from poorly executed signs of cliche romantic development(oh goodness gracious me she saw him SHIRTLESS and he's HOT and she leaned on his SHOULDER and he didn't MIND oh tehehehehehhehehe!), partially from imagining how terribly the romance could play out. And considering John's track record for these kinds of things...hoo boy.

Since Diana And The Bull died off in the first chapter why the fuck are they even listed as characters? And class? What is this, World of Warcraft?

sooo, if the members of the Swords of Ariel guild all have animal nicknames (Bull, White Wolf), why doesn't Adrien have one? He was even in the same team as the other two. (and what does "A team member of the White Wolf" even mean? The White Wolf was a person, not a team, right?)

and why do some characters have animal ears and tails while others are plain humans? No one in the story seems to be surprised by the presence of catgirls (or wolfgirls), so are they a common thing in that world? But so far only the two sisters are catgirls. Are they different species? If Adrien bangs Kessah and they have a kid, will it have animal ears or human ears?

Wow this comic is just one big anatomical clusterfuck.

We're looking at the most cliche comic on the internet, and you still care about the anatomy?

Well there was the one page with the ponies plug,

So I'm starting to think that only women get animal mutations. Which is kinda odd.

I thinks his eyes might be growing between pages
also people open their mouths when they talk

but at least he drew in a background riiiight?

Just another example of how little thought went into this shitbrew.

Only the women have animal ears
JohnJoseco looks like he has a thing for lesbians

therefore, Illuminati
also he doesn't want any es getting involved in his kink

Wait....



Dis nigga still ponyfaggin'?

He never stopped ponyfaggin, bob.

So either this is the most terrible fanfiction or the most generic bullshit original.

Probably just a cameo to make bronies reading go "OMG OMG IT"S LYRA N BON BON ZOMG!!!!!!!!", like how most of them literally cream they're pants in unison when they see Derpy on screen.