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Discussie in 'DeviantART' gestart door jack, 20 jun 2014.

  1. WhiteOmega EDF Hero

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    Putting aside the artwork and story, this page is a mess to look at. It's trying so hard to shove so much on one page, when it could have been separated onto three pages easily. Let's look at some comic pages to show what I mean:

    This is from the first Batman comic.

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    The comic is clearly favoring story, trying to get as much verbal story in the page but it sacrifices artwork, but not so much as to make it ugly. It still gives us something to look at. Now, this comic was written in the 1940's, lets look at something modern:

    This is from Batman '66 because I like the comic and original show shut up...

    batman66-thelostepisoy0f04.jpg

    batman66-thelostepisoe3f3f.jpg

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    Now...try to imagine if all three pages were squished onto one page...couldn't do it without making it ugly and cutting a lot of artwork and story. What I'm getting at is:

    Do you want to take time to draw more artwork to help tell the story, or do you want to hurry up and rush it out? It's a web comic...there is no dead line.

    It looks like he cut out a sequence on from when she got the metal apple and is now sitting on a bench...THAT is inexcusable when you have all the time in the world to make a comic and especially if it's on the SAME page.

    I have no words about holding the word bubble...is this comic supposed to be self aware?

    Also...poor attempt at humor with the jump thing, first time...okay...second time...dumb.
  2. FuanasEdan Girlvinyl

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    He does it because he know he couldn't keep a consistent schedule, even with patreon and kickstarter goal reached (promising regular updates). He thinks its better to put everything in a page or two to keep readers satisfied.
  3. PervyIdiot EDF Hero

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    Maybe if the bloody faggot would stop making redesigns of marvel characters and whining over Twitter, he could get some fucking work done.
  4. audionigger Dramacrat

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    He's a balding gooby beard man who can't get womyn to fuck him. What choice does he have other than whinging on twitter? You think this cunt has friends?
  5. PervyIdiot EDF Hero

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    Oh right, I was confusing Diaz with someone decent again.

    You go, Diaz! Keep bitching about first world problems on Twitter! Keep white-knighting for lying chicks and finding excuses not to work at your job! I'm sure the pussy is winging your way as we speak!
    audionigger vindt dit leuk.
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  6. FuanasEdan Girlvinyl

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    Crazy attract crazies. Who knows he might luck banging SJW's womyn... if desperate, caught molesting underage asian girl.
  7. PervyIdiot EDF Hero

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    I wonder if I just gifting Diaz a Japanese hooker for a night, would his absolute bullshit drop?

    I mean, once he realizes he can just buy him some pussy, he's got to crawl somewhat out of his own ass, right?
    audionigger en FuanasEdan vinden dit leuk.
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  8. audionigger Dramacrat

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    When a fucking 4'1 she gook tells him he's too small for her he will kill himself on the spot.
  9. PervyIdiot EDF Hero

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    So a win/win scenario.
  10. PervyIdiot EDF Hero

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    Doubleposting like a faggot, but if I was a dyke I'd marry this woman:

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    Shlomo Bernitz vindt dit leuk.
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