Holy shit that pacing was awful. I know we were just told something really important, and yet it felt like it went too fast, no time to take it all in.
So the big announcement was that he's a bad writer and his fans are idiots with too much disposable income Quite the revelation Oh, and also that he wants you to pay him money so he can sperg at you about his secondary waifu, Korra Fucking sign me up
yeah exactly! obviously she was stalling for time, but it felt like not a lot of time was being stalled for.
her cup size is changing from panel to panel. Her tits in the first panel are definitely smaller than those in the second last panel in the second row (where the black stuff is going for her neck). and oh my god the panel layout is just awful. I tried to read this comic (not just this page) and I just couldn't, my eyes would go all over the page. And it's so hard to get an idea of where the characters are since you never get a full shot of the entire room, just bits. On this page, at first I didn't understand why she's suddenly looking down on him (last panel in first row) since the snatching up in the second panel is just so unclear - I thought she jumped, not that she was yanked twenty meters above the ground. And in that looking-down panel her back is so relaxed - while in others she's struggling against the black shit that's grabbing her by the neck. Jeez this comic sucks.
He's certainly a considerate murderer to pause in the middle of 'boiling her brains' to answer all her questions. You'd think he'd be less accommodating, seeing as she's just blown half his face off and burned some of the flesh off his hand and arm(no blood though, for some reason. he seems perfectly fine). The sentences in the last row of panels just feel incomplete to me. Maybe it would make more sense if Diaz updated more often, because it comes off as the result of being rushed and just seems wrong.
I just checked is Patron. He's making over $2000 a month........................ HE'S GETTING $2000 FOR A SINGLE COMIC PAGE EVERY FEW MONTHS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There is no justice in this world
Wow, Kimiko ends up looking even more like a man in this update. And that villain we don't care about suddenly seems to revert back to the old DC style with his meme eyes. There's utterly no emotion to be read in their soulless expressions. Like seriously, "what I'm getting strangled move the plot ahead" and "I swear I'm going to kill you except not move the plot now" is the dialogue. Not to mention mistakes and shortcuts scattered everywhere in the art and the poor composition of each individual panel. Simply put it, he made this very quickly to get Patreon cash. On the plus side, this essentially proves he could have finished the DS storyline by the time this thread opened.
I thought so. He can easily rake up that amount considering the webcomic has been running for so long and the success of his kickstarter. And he could reach more. At this point, I'm more interested how far he can keep his promise regarding his schedule. This time, he didn't promise regular update for the comic.
Can one change the Milestones? IIRC he kept raising his Kickstarter to avoid regular updates, I wonder if he can pull the same stunt with Patreon just to get out of hiring a peon. Plus who in their right mind would work for a guy who considers the position as " Peon "? And how was he not able to hire someone with his Kickstarter cash? Did he buy a used Bugatti Veyron or something?
Well thanks to Patreon I guess this is what Diaz can do on a tight schedule. I made this complaint about Dobby in the TP thread. Bust-shot, Bust-shot, Close-up, Mid-shot, Bust-shot... Oh my. If this is his best under a schedule then there's no reason this isn't updated twice a week. But wait, if he reached $4,500 a month that's a guaranteed page every other week. Even if you give a $1 you're still getting ripped off.
There is more copypasta in that comic page than a typical Syac strip. Atleast Dobson had a little bit of an excuse because his comic isn't action-oriented and doesn't need dynamic panels. This is beyond lazy. And HOLY FUCKING SHIT I JUST NOTICED THAT GUY IN THE 11TH PANEL! WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH HIS LEGS!!??
I can't even follow those speech bubbles. When does who say what? Diaz stop drinking at starbucks and spend more time on your comic. He absolutely could've done more than this for the comic.
He's making over 3k per month now, and he doesn't even update his comic every month? What the fuck does he do with his spare time? Volunteer work? He obviously doesn't need a job with that kind of income, so what is fucking excuse? Why the fuck do people keep throwing money at lazy piece of shit? For fuck's sakes, people who do it for free are much more efficient than this wanker. Also what a punchable-looking face he has there.
